Peer Review #1

https://isabelladigi.home.blog/2020/03/17/week-4-blog-1-write-a-prose-soliloquy-in-which-you-are-either-hamlet-or-ophelia-commenting-on-the-world-around-you-in-2020/

Hi Isabella, 

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the soliloquy you wrote from the perspective of Ophelia. Your word choice was carefully thought out and your language was firm, capturing my attention from the beginning. I especially liked your line, “I am nothing but helpless, a tiny speck, a grain of sand amongst this vast ocean”. It truly cemented the concept of Ophelia being an onlooker, viewing the destruction within the world but unable to help. A lot has occurred this year; bushfires, floods and this terrible pandemic and I was able to hear the cry for help within your writing. The images you included also complemented your soliloquy very well.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!