Hi Veronica,
I enjoyed reading how visiting the State Library, virtually, has enhanced your understanding and appreciation of Shakespeare. I agree with you in that his work is timeless and expresses “the essential characteristics of human nature”. I loved how you incorporated the words of Ben Johnson regarding Shakespeare as well. It truly cemented how his work transcends time. On a more critical note, I feel perhaps that also commenting on the Shakespeare room within the State Library and how its contents also reflect Shakespeare’s powerful work, would elevate your blog post. Nevertheless, your blog still delved into how your visit enhanced your understanding of Shakespeare and his place in the world and was interesting to read.
Great work!
Holly’s Blog 
A good peer review and thank you for your effort to suggest ways in which Veronica’s blog could have been enhanced.
*Please attend to editing your work carefully. Here is what I have picked up:
*Ben Johnson’s = Jonson
*Shakespeare as well, it truly cemented = Shakespeare as well. It truly cemented
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