Hi Isabella,
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog. Your writing captured my attention instantly and it was truly descriptive, allowing me to connect with your own personal experience. I especially liked how you wrote about connecting with your family in a town “full of rich history”, hearing stories from your grandparents about how they lived and how this whole experience shaped the way you viewed life.
I would’ve loved to hear about other aspects of your trip that you may have connected with as well but nevertheless, it was an amazing blog. I loved the ending. It truly made me stop and think about how being alive and existing are two separate ideas and how we should all strive to be and feel alive. The pictures you included also accompanied your words very well.
Well done!
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