Peer Review #2

https://literaturetalk.home.blog/2020/08/19/dear-mr-realist/

Hi Evelyn, 

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog post. It truly addressed how Wilfred Owen’s vision and work has left an immense impact and is still needed in the current context. Your writing appears clear and precise, filled with emotion. I loved how you referenced his poem, ‘Dulce et Decorum Est’, and how in the world right now, we do not need more ‘old lies’. This year has been challenging and you captured this greatly in your letter to Owen as I could hear the plea within your writing for realism to come back to us. 

The letter could perhaps have been divided into smaller paragraphs rather than one whole paragraph but despite this, it was still a very powerful piece. Well Done!