https://dylanversola.home.blog/2020/08/25/blog-3-2/
Hi Dylan,
Your blog post was very interesting to read! I really liked how you implemented a lot of imagery, for example, through “Bleached of any real hope” and how spending time on social media causes you to “reflect neurotically” upon your own life in comparison to others. It was a very powerful visual. I also agree that change is hard, especially when we are not in control and do not know what may arise as a result of it. Your ending “It is a barren feeling” was simple yet very effective. It truly captured how although in a time when technology is on the rise and we are all connected, we are never truly connected with each other. Your words were carefully chosen, however, there were a couple of lengthy sentences that made it slightly confusing at times to read. Nevertheless, it was still a very intriguing post.
Well Done!
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